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[attach]693193[/attach] :loveliness: :loveliness: :loveliness: :bb :bb [quote]原帖由 [i]自由者[/i] 于 2008-7-25 10:25 发表 [url=http://www.zgsfj.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2150071&ptid=131356][img]http://www.zgsfj.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]:loveliness: :loveliness: :loveliness: [/quote]
:xh :xh :xh :xh [quote]原帖由 [i]金波[/i] 于 2008-7-25 11:46 发表 [url=http://www.zgsfj.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2150191&ptid=131356][img]http://www.zgsfj.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
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:hh :hh :lol: :lol: :lol: :sg :sg :sg :sg [quote]原帖由 [i]非著名书佳[/i] 于 2008-7-25 13:36 发表 [url=http://www.zgsfj.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2150272&ptid=131356][img]http://www.zgsfj.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
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:dy :dy :dy 字写的流畅连贯,有气势。但把"鱼"写成了"渔",把"昔"写成"夕",把"击"写作"急"就有伤作品大雅了!瞎说勿怪!
:gc :gz 上下连贯要自然,不要做作.:hc :hc :hc [quote]原帖由 [i]高云峰[/i] 于 2008-7-28 16:19 发表 [url=http://www.zgsfj.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2154914&ptid=131356][img]http://www.zgsfj.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
字写的流畅连贯,有气势。但把"鱼"写成了"渔",把"昔"写成"夕",把"击"写作"急"就有伤作品大雅了!瞎说勿怪!
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有错字一定注意,感谢:xh :xh :xh :xh [quote]原帖由 [i]赵增明[/i] 于 2008-7-28 17:42 发表 [url=http://www.zgsfj.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2155034&ptid=131356][img]http://www.zgsfj.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
上下连贯要自然,不要做作.:hc :hc :hc [/quote]
谢谢指点:xh :xh :xh :gz :gz :gz :gz [quote]原帖由 [i]徐一夫[/i] 于 2008-7-29 09:45 发表 [url=http://www.zgsfj.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2156097&ptid=131356][img]http://www.zgsfj.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
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感谢支持:xh :xh :xh :xh :xh
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