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一水间 发表于 2008-10-19 13:12

八尺隶书三条屏敬请在线方家点评

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兽人半亩地 发表于 2008-10-21 16:40

不错!看上去很劲~~~~~~:hh :hh

一水间 发表于 2008-10-21 20:05

感谢楼上两位朋友跟贴点评

还望二位多针对我的作品存在问题进行批评。

刘山林 发表于 2008-10-22 11:00

重在参与！字形有些夸张做作了！

一水间 发表于 2008-10-23 10:21

感谢楼上老师批评指正！！！

觅古草堂主人 发表于 2008-10-25 22:17

线条太夸张，有点做作。

蒋岑 发表于 2008-10-27 05:38

:v :gz :hc :gc

荷香源泥 发表于 2008-11-1 20:00

:tx :tx :tx
学习!学习!

傍山草堂 发表于 2008-11-1 21:42

建议投这个！前一个不好！

傍山草堂 发表于 2008-11-1 21:42

建议投这个！前一个不好！

一水间 发表于 2008-11-2 11:24

致楼上朋友

朋友,你喜欢动感线条呀,我认为隶书应该以静态为主,肃穆大所静气为高境界,不应只追求小情趣和所谓的行草笔意而带来燥气和轻浮.说心里话我喜欢前面创作的格调,实际作品要比动感线条的作品强很多.

一水间 发表于 2008-11-2 11:27

朋友,请批呀!!!!求批呀!!!

吾婺 发表于 2008-11-3 08:14

回复 #12 一水间 的帖子

有道理，同感

一水间 发表于 2008-11-3 10:07

致楼上朋友

高山流水，知音难觅，朋友咱们有共同的审美观点，值得好好交流一下。

竣石 发表于 2008-11-4 17:12

:hc :hc :hc :hc :hc

大镛 发表于 2008-11-4 23:15

下部位有些乱

翰元堂 发表于 2008-11-5 10:27

质朴自然些更好。:hh :hh :hh

翰元堂 发表于 2008-11-5 10:28

[quote]原帖由 [i]一水间[/i] 于 2008-11-2 11:24 发表 [url=http://www.zgsfj.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2298565&ptid=137001][img]http://www.zgsfj.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
朋友,你喜欢动感线条呀,我认为隶书应该以静态为主,肃穆大所静气为高境界,不应只追求小情趣和所谓的行草笔意而带来燥气和轻浮.说心里话我喜欢前面创作的格调,实际作品要比动感线条的作品强很多. [/quote]
:sj

夹生饭 发表于 2008-11-15 18:30

写得不错，有戏

夹生饭 发表于 2008-11-15 18:31

写得不错，有戏

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